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Sunday, 18 May 2025

The Toll (short story)

 


The Toll

(Random 2-word prompt- pavement, toll)

 

                “How much?!”  Flower threw his hands in the air in frustration.  He could feel the heat in his face radiating to his ears.  “But you just let the two people in front of me pass for free!”

The tall burly man crossed his arms tighter, then growled a noise that indicated he didn’t care.  He seemed to grow, muscles bulging in his shirt, his large body blocking access to the bridge even more so than before.  He glared down at Flower, his small head tucked between two engorged shoulders.

“Come on!” pleaded Flower.  It was cold in the shadow of the man, the bright morning sun trapped behind that large back.  “I just want to get home!  I’ve never had to pay a toll before!”

“It’s new,” grumbled the guard.  “Pay up.”

Flower sighed, blowing air through his nostrils as if he were a dragon.  “I haven’t got enough; I’ve only got a few coins on me.”

“Not my problem.”

“Urgh, can’t I just owe you?”

The big man shook his head, frowning.

Flower looked down at his feet.  He considered making a run for it, trying to dart around the guard and sprinting across the bridge, but he knew he stood no chance.  He was only small, and the big burly guard would catch him and grind him to a pulp in seconds.  He didn’t fancy being pulped; he already felt drained enough this morning and his innards would make a weak jam.

He turned to walk away, but…

“How much you got?” gruffed the guard.

Hope.  Flower smiled at the man; he reached into his pocket and held his coins out on his palm.  “Four coins,” he said.  “Is that okay to pass?  Will you take it?”

The big guard laughed.  “It’s not for me dummy.”  His arms unfurled, and a thumb swung to his left.  “Head down the steps to the river; the ferryman will take you across for a couple of coins.”

“The ferryman?”  Flower had never heard of any ferry crossing the river before, though there’d never been a man stopping people crossing the bridge before either.

“The ferryman,” repeated the guard, his grimace returning, joined by a condescending tone in his voice.  “Down the steps.  Two coins.”  He refolded his arms and become the imposing stoic statue once more.  “Fuck off.”

Flower didn’t say thanks; he shook his head and sighed, then headed out of the large man’s shadow and toward the steps.

The stairway was bereft of the dazzling morning sunlight, yet it still retained some heat; it was humid, sticky.  He tried not to slip on the stones as he descended into the misty gloom below the bridge.  Flower lost sight of the pavement above.

It had been quiet up there, it was early, and he’d only seen the guard and two other people; down here, it was quieter.  Too quiet.  The mist thickened with each step.  He could hear the lapping of the shore, slow and steady, like a whisper.  He could hear his boots crunch against the gravel.  He could hear his chest wheeze through the damp air.  There was nothing else to hear.  No birds singing.  No crickets chirping.  Nothing.  It was as if the misty waters had sucked away all the usual noises of the riverbank.

A shadow emerged from the grey clouds.  It was tall, taller than the guard, but thinner.  Much thinner.  It wore black robes, tattered, hooded.  Flower could see no face beneath the cowl.  The wooden boat washed up against the shore with nary a sound.

“Are you the ferryman?”  He gulped.  There was no reply.  “Ferrywoman?  Ferryperson?”  Flower took a step toward the river, then pointed up.  “The guard told me there’d be a ferryman… that you’d take me across the river for a couple of coins.”

The hooded figure looked up, then back at Flower.  It nodded a slow and deliberate nod.

“Uh… okay,” said Flower.  He hesitated closer, glanced around, then stepped onto the ferryman’s boat.  It wobbled in the water.

A bony and open hand extended out to him, and Flower hurriedly placed two coins on its palm.  The skin was cold and dry, the antithesis of the muggy air.  The hand withdrew back within the black robes, and the tall figure nodded it’s slow and deliberate nod once more.

Flower sat down.  “Er… th… th… thank you,” he stuttered.  He wasn’t sure whether he was happy to finally be heading home or scared shitless by whatever was happening down here under the bridge.

Flower smiled at the ferryman, who leant onto the long pole it carried and pushed off into the river.

“It’s… uh… a lovely morning, isn’t it?”  The thick mist had consumed the air, and he could no longer see the shore behind him, or the blue skies above.  It was grey and swampy.  He wondered if the glorious morning continued without them.

The ferryman said nothing.  The skiff continued gliding through the water.

“Do you get many people down here?” babbled Flower.  His nerves shook the words from his mouth in a jabber of syllables.  “I expect so; the river is lovely in the summer.”

The silence continued.  So did the boat.  The only sound was the swish of the disturbed river as they moved.

“It’s warm, isn’t it?” he said.  Flower flapped his hands in his face, an unsuccessful action to cool his sweating body.  The humidity was starting to get to him; the misty clouds closing in, sticking to his skin, moisture refusing to leave him.  “Aren’t you warm in that cloak?  It looks like it’s made of a thick wool.”

Again, he was met with no reply from the gangly ferryman.  The wooden boat answered instead, creaking as it rocked along the waters, moving ever forward for what seemed forever.  He wondered if he’d made a mistake; would they ever reach the other shore?  He’d jumped into a boat with a stranger.

“Uh…”  The silence felt even more palpable now; it was as thick as the muggy mist, and almost as slick.  Flower’s words would just slip right off, ignored by the taciturn ferryman.  He wanted to say something, but his voice would be futile.

He was lost on the river, deep in the mist, with a tall and cloaked figure.

And then the skiff hit the shore, wooden hull scraping against the stones, screeching and rasping.  They came to a halt.  Flower was saved.

He stood.  “Th… thanks again.”

The slender, towering ferryman reached out an icy hand and touched his shoulder, freezing Flower to the spot.  The cloaked man leant close, and, in a gravelly voice that stank of the grave, whispered two chilling words into his ear, words so cold that they curdled Flower’s blood.  He didn’t know what to say, how to respond, but he watched as the ferryman straightened, lifted his bony finger up and back towards the bridge, and pointed through the thick mist to where the burly guard had blocked his passage.

The ferryman laughed, a rattling hiss emanating from within the folds of the black cowl, and turned back to Flower.

He saw the reality within the hood.

Flower ran, jumping from the boat, racing up the steps from the river.  He ran and ran, didn’t stop until he was safely within his home.

He knew that tomorrow, the ferryman would be gone, and that he’d never need to pay a toll to cross the bridge ever again.

The End.

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Saturday, 8 February 2025

Foggy Flower (short story)

 

Foggy Flower

(Random 2-word prompt- inspector, grounds)

 

                The mist was thick and cold.  So was he.  Cold, that is.  His clothes were soaked with a penetrating and perpetual damp that sank right down to his bones.  Flower shivered, his breath caught by the icy air, condensing around his lips with every exhale.

                His torch did very little to help his visibility in the dark of the night; it’s narrow beam only caught misty grey walls closing in on him… and yet, he could still somehow feel the wide-open castle grounds around him.  It was both claustrophobic and agoraphobic.  He felt vulnerable.

                Flower kept walking, a quick pace; he wanted to get home.  His dull footsteps, and their accompanied syncopated echo, were the only sound of life in the gardens, though a gentle breeze tussled the bushes intermittently too.

                He’d heard that ghosts haunted the castle grounds.  George, the old guard, had regaled him with terrifying tales and supernatural stories all evening, and those eerie yarns had spooked him.

                Flower’s torch flickered.

                George had told him of headless knights stalking the paths, vengeful wailing maidens in white dresses with slit wrists creeping through the bougainvillea.  He’d spun fables of gruesome beasts hiding under the hedgerows, creatures with long red claws and creepy grins, waiting to grab unsuspecting victims by their ankles and pull them into their lair.  He’d told Flower about the evil witches and warlocks who, hundreds of years ago, used these grounds for their dark rituals and blood sacrifices, and who, while being tortured and burnt at the stake, swore a cursed revenge in their afterlife as spirits.

                His torch flickered again.  And again.

George had told Flower that the witches and warlocks could still sometimes be heard, crying out their pained curses in the middle of the night, casting malevolent spells on those with fear in their hearts.

Of course, Flower didn’t believe any of those fictional fables…

The torch died, and Flower came to a sudden stop, the echo of his footsteps following suit almost immediately.  The walls of grey mist were replaced with walls of blind darkness in an instant.  There was nowhere to go.  He couldn’t see anything in front of him.  He shuddered in the cold.  His clothes deepened the icy feeling on his skin, sodden by the damp air, and goosebumps stalked up his arms.

The wind crept around him, and the flora of the gardens whispered secrets to it.  Flower’s heart quickened, so did his breathing.  He was alone, hoped he was alone, in the quiet dark.  He began to see the grey of the mist as his eyes adjusted to the dark; it did little to improve his vision.  He looked at his feet; he could just about make out the path.

And then, a high-pitched cry in the distance broke the silence of the night.  The whinny of a horse in the castle stables.  Or was it a witch, a warlock, cursing him?  Was it a gruesome beast in the hedgerows?  Or a wailing maiden?

The silence retuned just as quickly as it’d been disturbed.

And…

Flower broke in a run, boots thumping against the stone path, eyes straining in the dark.  He ran and he ran and he ran.  He could feel it behind him.  Something was there, following.  It echoed his steps, chased him through the fog.  His legs strained to move faster.  His heart thrummed hard.  He ran.  His lungs struggled.  He tried not to scream, but fearful utterances escaped his lips.

A rock or a branch caught his foot.  He cried out as he fell, his body slammed into the dewy grass, his face collided with the earth.  He was winded and hurt.

                He didn’t move, couldn’t move.  He shivered in the dirt, but not from the cold.

                The pursuing footsteps came to halt, and Flower could sense the presence standing over him.  He could hear it wheeze and groan; it gurgled a death rattle.

                The supernatural creature was about to pounce.

                “Flower?” came a breathless, yet familiar voice.

                Flower twisted onto his back and looked up into a light that now shone on his prone body.

                “You forgot your keys,” wheezed George the guard, pointing his torch down at the man.  He tossed the keys to Flower.  “Why did you have to run so fast?  Silly bugger.  I could barely keep up.”

The End.

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