Flower and the Carousel
(Random
2-word prompt- fair, horror)
Flower’s
boots struck against the wooden slats of the pier, tapping a rhythm that
disturbed the cold night air. The pier
creaked, objecting not just to his hurried footsteps, but to the swish and
swash of the ocean that tickled its wooden toes below him. The arrhythmic tune both interrupted and heightened
the silence, which was deep and sharp, almost dangerous. His
breaths laboured, he was out of shape, trailing vapour from his lips as he
moved.
He was almost
there.
The carousel
had broken again, a late callout, and it was up to Flower to repair it before
the Queen’s party tomorrow.
He was alone on
the pier, though the stars kept him company, grains of salt scattered across
the dark sky, reflected in the ocean. He
could almost smell them, the briny pricks of light. Some were obscured by elongated grey clouds,
misshapen tentacles clinching the firmament, ready to squeeze. The moon sat amongst them, unconcerned by
their touch.
Flower
shivered.
It’d turned
chilly, a sudden change from the warm and dry day, and he’d forgotten his
jacket. The cold air crawled up his
spine, fingering the vertebrae, reaching into his head and digging its nails
into his amygdala. He felt nervous and
jumpy, but he didn’t know why.
He needed to
get this done, and quick.
Flower
swallowed his urge to run; he approached his target.
The carousel
seemed strange tonight; it didn’t look quite like it was supposed to. An uncanny valley of a merry-go-round. The red and white conical roof wasn’t quite
as pointed as it should be, wasn’t quite as symmetrical or uniform. The support poles beneath seemed less
straight, more… bulbous. A distorted
carousel.
No.
He was tired,
it was dark, and his imagination was going wild. Flower squeezed his eyes shut, trying to
force away the inexplicable vision, and blinked.
Was the
carousel the same?
He took a step
forward.
The silence
broke. Cracked. A loud clicking, syncopated and organic, pierced
the cold night air; it was deep and low, at first, but rose and rose in pitch
and frequency. It creaked like a heavy
door on ancient hinges, a door opening to what horrors, Flower didn’t know. And then it stopped, almost as suddenly as
it’d come. It echoed in his bones, and
he found himself frozen to the spot.
He focused on
the sounds of ocean, the sea baying at the shores, biting the struts of the
pier. The wood groaned in response. But everything was different. The music of this night was out of tune.
The air smelled
of salt, more intensely than it should; it tingled the hairs in his nose.
His heart was
in his throat, his breathing shallow, and he realised he was no longer alone…
if he’d even been alone to begin with.
There was someone...
something else here.
Flower’s eyes
scanned the carousel, searching, probing the shadowy mounts trapped within its
cage for something out of place. Seahorses
seemed to rear up in fright. Sharks
shrank away. A whale opened its gigantic
maw to scream. The petrified sea life,
once merry and inviting, wore terrifying faces in the gloom. Hordes of glass eyes watched Flower from
inside the ride.
He gulped down
his heart and took another step.
His boot
slapped and splashed into a shallow puddle that was creeping its way along the
decking. It was coming from the
carousel.
He stopped
again.
A pool of
water, as wide as the merry-go-round, was spreading out from its mechanical carcass. Like blood from a wound. And now that he was a little closer, he realised
the whole thing was wet, soaking, the frightened wooden creatures glossy. Dripping.
He could hear the drips, quiet ticks counting down.
Flower could
feel it now, the presence. Something
large and looming. Hidden in the dark. Close.
The smell of
the sea was stronger now, pungent. He
could taste it.
The carousel
moved. Just slightly, and not as it
should. The supports warped, and
shifted, the roof shuddered.
And the
clicking returned.
Kck kck kck
kckckckckckckck.
It vibrated the
air. It shook Flower’s organs. He wanted to run… but he couldn’t.
Kck kck kck
kckckckckckckck.
Kckckckckckckck.
And then he saw
it.
Large eyes, with
rectangular pupils, stared down hungrily at Flower. For a moment, they seemed to float in midair
above the carousel, but then the ride transformed. The roof rippled and morphed, the supporting
poles swung up and out, tentacles, and the monster that was hidden in the
night, camouflaged against the red and white carousel, revealed itself.
Kckckckckckckck
kck kck!
Slimy orange
skin emerged from the dark, invisible became visible. Shape and form rippled into existence, a
creature mounted on the roof of the carousel, undisguised and blatant. It loomed.
Its big eyes, peering out from a bulbous and enormous head, examined Flower,
seemingly waiting for something, and he realised his mouth had fallen open in
reply, an empty scream trapped inside his throat. He prayed to survive, but only an eldritch
god consumed his thoughts.
Kraken.
A long and thick
tentacle, swathed in suckers, whipped up and out, barrelled into his chest, it
hurt, and Flower was thrown back. He hit
the deck hard, wind knocked from his lungs, and his body bounced across the
wood before scraping to a halt. He
struggled to catch his breath, winded, broken ribs. Bruised.
He wanted to scream, wanted to run.
He rolled onto his side and vomited.
Kck kck kck kck
kck kck kck.
The colossal
cephalopod was still there, watching, and Flower could do nothing but wait for his
death.
The creature’s
round head throbbed, eyes narrowed, its pupils focussed down on Flower’s body. Its arms slithered on the wet pier, tracing
slow spherical and curved paths, drawing unnatural runes in the puddles.
Flower stared
back in terror.
And then it
screamed, a series of ear-splitting clicks that breached the night air fast and
frantic. Tentacles gripped and clawed at
the wooden creatures of the carousel beneath it, ripping and pulling, tearing
and rending. The ride creaked and
cracked in agony. The kraken cried out.
The end was
nigh.
Flower closed
his eyes.
Silence. Nothing happened. No slimy appendages wrapped themselves around
his prostrate form, no huge mouth slurped up his innards.
He heard a loud
splash.
Salt lingered
in his nose, on his tongue. The
screeching call of the monster rung in his ear.
Its cold presence lingered along his spine. Everything hurt.
He peeked out into
the night, and saw nothing but the empty carcass of the carousel.
The kraken had stolen
away the seahorses and sharks, and the whale; it had caught its prey, its food,
and retreated to the depths.
Flower was
alone on the pier, thankfully unappetising.
The End.
Wow! Gripping story. It had me at every moment till the end. Thanks ❤️ 😊
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Deletethis story was interesting and well-done in several ways. i liked the referential features of the carousel and the queen, (as well as the tarts and ants in another story of yours.) i am impressed in your stories by the direct short style of writing, being expanded to include important features or actions and by the use of the varied senses in this one and the other two that i have read. i see clearly you either research or know a lot about varied topics from sea creatures to body tensions. you use much non-trite material and even when close to being trite (but not quite,) you come up with lines such as this:
ReplyDelete"He gulped down his heart and took another step."
the very direct and descriptive nature of them makes them so enjoyable to read and imagine.
Thanks! Appreciated!
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